L3 - GROUP 3 (Tom & Liam) Fim Opening Rough Cut from cmdiploma on Vimeo.
Above is Tom & Liams rough cut for their film opening.
So far i think that this looks like a really promising film opening, but there is still things that need to be put in. For example you still need to add titles to your opening. I think you need to make it more clear what the story is acctually about, because from an outsiders point of view it doesnt seem to have much meaning.
I also am not really sure what the audio is at the beginning of the opening,
but whatever it is it needs to be clearer as this could contribute a lot to the opening. I also think you should vary your shots a little more as there seems to be a lot of walking in long shot frames which can seem a little boring. Overall this seems like a good start to your film opening and with a few changes it is sure to be very good :)
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